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→September 23rd, 2009, 6:00 pm

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the-star-samurai, August 29th, 2009, 11:06 pm

Transitioning into blue. Cuz it's like semi-past sunset now.
Elbow-jabbing Liam makes me smile. ;u; And I think I SLIGHTLY improved w/my soccer-playing-drawing skills? Kinda. xD

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kunpuu.chan, September 23rd, 2009, 7:19 pm


Caffienated Sponge, September 23rd, 2009, 7:30 pm

Yups! The vp's are great. And Liam's little monologue about blanking out his feeling by immersing himself in soccer is actually a little sad. Sniff.

Overall the sporting moves look okay apart from the kick in panel 5... it looks more like Liam just kicked at the ball with his heel. The foot should be straight out, almost like a ballerina doing point, to deliver the force from the big toe... *geek mode off*

Love the idea wiht the blue! ^_^

Chan Is No Longer a Guest, September 23rd, 2009, 9:31 pm

I think the Soccer looks fine. I don't know anything about soccer though, so ya know. XD
But yeah, I like the perspective and blue idea. 8DD

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